tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-38898773.post4555574831082331297..comments2023-03-24T08:39:15.033-07:00Comments on The Flying Bloghouse: Entangled Indecision Over Webcomic Header!Lighthouse Pilothttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15818552883372650368noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-38898773.post-83633289323979148282013-02-14T10:20:57.444-08:002013-02-14T10:20:57.444-08:00In my opinion the text itself get's lost in th...In my opinion the text itself get's lost in the circle area. I would suggest blocking that area off so that the text is secluded from the original "S" shape.<br />OR<br />You could even make it possibly simpler by putting a one or two point stroke that matches the background color (that sort of tan toned paper). That will give just enough room for the "E" to be readable. <br /><br />Other than that I would dim the background elements (the sketchwork) even further so that the text stands out even more, while still maintaining a subtle amount of that sketch behind the text.<br /><br />Either way, it's looking good, but could just use very slight refinements.Mathew Kaminskihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12480278008697659394noreply@blogger.com