I have details to add to the coloring and I may or may not add more detail to the line art colors, but the flats are done and I like where they're heading. Any suggestions? I'm open! Oh...and don't worry, Joel, I'm working on something blue as we speak. :)
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Very nice! I would say the only VERY MINOR nitpick is with the bullets in the background around the figure. They add more interest to an already dynamic pose, but they're a little awkwardly placed, and the trajectory of them are a bit uniform. I'd shake up the arrangement and the direction of the rounds and the piece would be beyond "Slap yo' mama" good :)
Wow, awesome! I love the hat flying off his head :). I agree with Derrick about the bullets... and I really don't know if it is my place to point this out or not, but its bothering me, so here goes:
I'm a little confused with the left leg from the knee down to the foot. I can't turn my foot inward like that without my knee following. Maybe if you just got rid of that little definition line where his knee cap is it would make more sense to me. Maybe I'm wrong... its up to you! :) Great action pose, though I love it.
I think you're both spot on. Derrick, yep, I need more bullets and bullets on varying trajectories. I got a little lazy. I can draw more bullets and add/change them in le Photoshop. Marie, that leg has been bugging me as well. The thigh was originally longer so I shortened it in Photoshop with some cutting and pasting, but I think that leg almost looks like a right leg as a result. Plus, you're also right about the little knee dent. It ALSO makes it kinda look like a right leg. The foot was tough to do at that angle. I used reference, but something still seems iffy.
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